Oh... OH... I thought this was the full game and it was called "Otome Legends (TRAIL VER)". And the whole description saying this isn't the full game was part of the game world. Just like the game "MetaWare High School (Demo)" by Not Fun Games. ...Especially cause you spelled Trial as Trail, I thought it was just a meta title and the description was in on it too.
I didn't realize there is actually a real full version that has been recently released for $15, which is 10 hours long. May I suggest putting "END OF THE TRIAL VERSION" at the end of what you can access in this game? Or if not, no biggie. It's just when it ended, it was not clear. I thought I was supposed to figure out how to unlock the rest. I didn't realize I already reached the end of what is available. Mostly cause I thought this was actually the entire game and the title was meta.
ok anyways this is an actual review of the game so i will make sure to be serious as i type this (i will not but i mean)
in short: 7.5 atm
in full length: (spoiler alert)
NOW WHERE DO I BEGIN. ok yusuke, white haired one , green haired one, and the nerd. they are all very charming. the geek nerd thing one is my fav because gap moe (i think every route boy has gap moe).
ok nvm i just replayed the game to get a look at the story again and apparenly the nerd is named ishida. anyways ishidas death was kind of. meh to me??? u shouldve gave chiharu - i think that is her name - and him more screentime and more digging into the lore. like since mc has also been bullied in middle school and ishidas getting bullied in high school they shouldve bonded over that.
tbh what this game lacks most is foreshadowing and i guess the discussion of past events??? and also more character depth. like more character traits if that makes sense? more creepy/mysterious vibes with nao and more personality with chiharu (im sorry queen ur just kind of lacking). and also the argument with nao and chiharu in the hiro route???? personally me id add a bit of chiharu mentioning middle school nao for people thinking about "wait what the fuck? huh?" as it goes on
etc.
naomi being so mean to hiro is so uncalled for....... like chiharu should at least tell her "why r u bullying that man like you did to me middle school?" or something like that. im guessing that the games gonna also explain how chiharu thought yuusuke was there. idk if the trafficking building is real or not but i hope it is. just like. chiharu mumbling to herself like there r two other people with her.
also i really wonder what is up with the "did u really think you had a choice" and this jarring feeling of "what the hell" lurking in the back of ur mind in ur playthrough of the game. maybe theres a big bad villain where its like "HAHAHAH I PLANNED THIS ALL I DISGUISED AS NAOMI AND MADE U INTO THE PERFECT OTOME MC BECAUSE BLAH BLAH BLAH"
theres also some error with the dialogue i think. idk if its still present rn but u should still get a proofreader for the release
The plot twist killed my family and burned my crops /hj
I didn´t realize the tags until too late.... my mistake, but it also added to my experience (panicking because I thought I got a bad end or sum and replaying the game trying to get another ending in tears)
I was just a little suspicious of Naomi, yet she has more weight to the story than at first thought. The amongus was a weird wake up call for me to realize this jdfnbdjsfn. I began from thinking Naomi might be a little thorn at the side for the plot to having no understanding of what was going on. I love otome/dating sims that might just leave me in the asylumn /hj???
I dont know what´s happening but it´s very interesting as it is. I liked it, whatever is the developer next move with this game, I wholeheartly support it <3.
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Oh... OH... I thought this was the full game and it was called "Otome Legends (TRAIL VER)". And the whole description saying this isn't the full game was part of the game world. Just like the game "MetaWare High School (Demo)" by Not Fun Games. ...Especially cause you spelled Trial as Trail, I thought it was just a meta title and the description was in on it too.
I didn't realize there is actually a real full version that has been recently released for $15, which is 10 hours long. May I suggest putting "END OF THE TRIAL VERSION" at the end of what you can access in this game? Or if not, no biggie. It's just when it ended, it was not clear. I thought I was supposed to figure out how to unlock the rest. I didn't realize I already reached the end of what is available. Mostly cause I thought this was actually the entire game and the title was meta.
ok anyways this is an actual review of the game so i will make sure to be serious as i type this (i will not but i mean)
in short: 7.5 atm
in full length:
(spoiler alert)
NOW WHERE DO I BEGIN. ok yusuke, white haired one , green haired one, and the nerd. they are all very charming. the geek nerd thing one is my fav because gap moe (i think every route boy has gap moe).
ok nvm i just replayed the game to get a look at the story again and apparenly the nerd is named ishida. anyways ishidas death was kind of. meh to me??? u shouldve gave chiharu - i think that is her name - and him more screentime and more digging into the lore. like since mc has also been bullied in middle school and ishidas getting bullied in high school they shouldve bonded over that.
tbh what this game lacks most is foreshadowing and i guess the discussion of past events??? and also more character depth. like more character traits if that makes sense? more creepy/mysterious vibes with nao and more personality with chiharu (im sorry queen ur just kind of lacking). and also the argument with nao and chiharu in the hiro route???? personally me id add a bit of chiharu mentioning middle school nao for people thinking about "wait what the fuck? huh?" as it goes on
etc.
naomi being so mean to hiro is so uncalled for....... like chiharu should at least tell her "why r u bullying that man like you did to me middle school?" or something like that. im guessing that the games gonna also explain how chiharu thought yuusuke was there. idk if the trafficking building is real or not but i hope it is. just like. chiharu mumbling to herself like there r two other people with her.
also i really wonder what is up with the "did u really think you had a choice" and this jarring feeling of "what the hell" lurking in the back of ur mind in ur playthrough of the game. maybe theres a big bad villain where its like "HAHAHAH I PLANNED THIS ALL I DISGUISED AS NAOMI AND MADE U INTO THE PERFECT OTOME MC BECAUSE BLAH BLAH BLAH"
theres also some error with the dialogue i think. idk if its still present rn but u should still get a proofreader for the release
anyways: 7.5/10
Can't wait for the steam version, keep up the good work! <3
I can't wait for the Steam version!!!
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Spoilers ahead:
The plot twist killed my family and burned my crops /hj
I didn´t realize the tags until too late.... my mistake, but it also added to my experience (panicking because I thought I got a bad end or sum and replaying the game trying to get another ending in tears)
I was just a little suspicious of Naomi, yet she has more weight to the story than at first thought. The amongus was a weird wake up call for me to realize this jdfnbdjsfn. I began from thinking Naomi might be a little thorn at the side for the plot to having no understanding of what was going on. I love otome/dating sims that might just leave me in the asylumn /hj???
I dont know what´s happening but it´s very interesting as it is. I liked it, whatever is the developer next move with this game, I wholeheartly support it <3.
OmO, I saw it in steam again. 6 weeks to go for the full release! I can't wait ✨